A: Hi!
B: Hello.
A: How’s everything?
B: Fine. I guess.
A: Do you know what time it is?
B: No. Not exactly.
A: Don’t you have a watch?
B: Not on me.
A: Well?
B: Well what?
A: What did you do last night?
B: What do you mean?
A: What did you do last night?
B: Nothing.
A: Nothing?
B: I said, nothing!
A: I’m sorry I asked.
B: That’s all right.
The trick is creating a scenario that is fully fleshed out. This includes both characters knowing what they want and knowing their motivations. In addition to that, there should be action - what is it they are doing? Avoid generalizations. Avoid "feeling" anything. Root the action in motivated choice and see what you come up with.
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